At first I thought this assignment was going to be really hard to find all of the transitions, pointing words and repeating key words and phrases. But since there is the command f it made it a lot easier to do. I have a lot of transitions but I think they’re all needed because there is a lot of comparing being done in my paper. The transitions are underlined, the pointing words are bolded and repeating key words and phrases are highlighted in pink. I think that the command f tool was very useful in this process because it made sure that I didn’t miss anything! 
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