My favorite revision strategies I learned this semester in English 110 is the peer review and revising their comments afterwards, if I agree with it. I didn’t really like any of the other revision strategies because they seem to complicate the paper too much, making a paragraph seem like a math equation. For example, I … [Read more…]
Revision Plan: I want to go back to my paper and figure out a better argument/thesis. I was really struggling how to incorporate everything I wanted to talk about in a way that made sense. I plan to go back to the basics, make a thesis statement, plan out the topics of my paper and … [Read more…]
Some media that I plan to use are songs or voices that I think are beautiful, photos, paintings, or drawings about landscapes that I find beautiful, and many other things that I think hold beauty. Outline: Intro – I think that beauty is a personal preference and that someone can see beauty in anything. -Introduce … [Read more…]
“To regard beauty as a luxury adornment or a social signifier was to miss the true potential of the experience.” I think that this statement is very interesting. It’s saying that people should look beyond the price tag or that a price tag shouldn’t be the reason why a piece of art work of any … [Read more…]
