I liked reading other people’s intros because it opened my eyes to other peoples views and ideas. I also liked reading them because it helped me figure out ways to word my own opinion better. I wanted to give some feed back on the person I complimented because I noticed some small things that would be easy to fix, which I thought would be helpful. I’m excited to see what people say about my intro paragraphs because mine are two very different intros, meaning that they’re looking at the topic in very different ways. Hopefully I get some good feed back on my own that I can use, I think that looking at my other classmates intros have also benefited my perspective and ideas.
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Emma,
If you didn’t receive what you wanted, you should get lots of peer review next week, after you’ve finished your free draft. This exercise’s primary goals were to: 1) expose you to your peers’ varying work 2) provide you the chance to “get your feet wet” in regards to commenting on other people’s work. Don’t forget to post your finished link as a comment on the appropriate blog number. Keep up the good work!
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